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Learning Goal: I’m working on a proofreading question and need support to help m

Learning Goal: I’m working on a proofreading question and need support to help me learn.Kindly note that I will provide you with the slides explaining the requirements, Take a look at it and edit the missing parts in the 2 papers accordingly.- First research paper (attached document named “research”):1. Edit and paraphrase the highlighted parts in the attached document.2. Also, paraphrase it to reduce the plagiarism percentage. It should not exceed %183. Add 10 references “Harvard style” ( google similar content and add it).4. Please edit against grammar mistakes, and content mistakes ________________________________- First research paper (attached document named “First publish 11”):1. Edit and paraphrase the highlighted parts in the attached document.2. Also, paraphrase it to reduce the plagiarism percentage. It should not exceed %183. Please edit against grammar mistakes, and content mistakes

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Learning Goal: I’m working on a proofreading practice test / quiz and need an ex

Learning Goal: I’m working on a proofreading practice test / quiz and need an explanation and answer to help me learn.It’s best to have a huge alarm system because you never know when you’ll get robbed
He is a citizen of the United States of America, which is a democracy. Therefore he must have very democratic views.
Either you believe studying is helpful or you don’t.
All of those movie stars are really rude. I asked Kevin Costner for his autograph in a restaurant in Westwood the other evening, and he told me to get lost.
Either you support Black Lives Matter, or you do not care about the struggle with racism.
Even though many people are concerned about the possible effects of global warming, nothing has been done to improve the situation.
Some think it’s okay to cheat in school, while others think it is not okay. I think it’s okay to sometimes cheat in school.
Guns are like hammers—they’re both tools with metal parts that could be used to kill someone. And yet it would be ridiculous to restrict the purchase of hammers—so restrictions on purchasing guns are equally ridiculous.
The greatest thing we can do is to love each other. Love is better than any other emotion
I am the best candidate for presidency. Look at how many followers I have.
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Learning Goal: I’m working on a proofreading practice test / quiz and need an ex

Learning Goal: I’m working on a proofreading practice test / quiz and need an explanation and answer to help me learn.Identify the fallacy and explain why you picked that fallacy. (25 points/5 points each1.Well, it’s time for a decision. Will you contribute $20 to our environmental fund, or are you on the side of environmental destruction?2. Ted: I think we should do more to conserve the environment and not cover pristine countryside with freeways.Fred: So you don’t want freeways to be built at all? How on earth do you imagine we’d get around?3.If the government bans students taking guns to school, next it will ban any guns being taken to school. Next, it will ban anybody taking guns to any public places. Next, the government will ban guns altogether!4.My boss is infallible; he tells me so. I know what he tells me is true because he is always right.Question: You have checked over your paper and you find an ad hominem fallacy. How might you revise your paper to eliminate this fallacy?Fix each sentenceAn egg and a banana is required for the recipe.
2. I nearly spent two hundred dollars on my recent car repair.3. Each of the children need some attention.4. Nobody in the class of fifty students understand how to solve the equation on the blackboard.5. Each of those breakfast cereals contain a high proportion of sugar.6. A sea-going bird the seagull eats fish.7. Having fired Fred, Ethel was hired.8. The window shade snapped up like a gunshot her cat leaped four feet off the floor.9. He knew he had flunked the driver’s exam, he ran over a stop sign.10. My daughter refused to stop smoking. Unless I quit also.11. I miss quite a few days of class early in the semester.12. The store owner watched the shopper carefully, she suspected him of stealing from her before.13. They thought it was their’s.14. Experts say, oil spills are dangerous.15. When I saw my roommate with my girlfriend, I felt worried, angry, andembarrassment as well.16.There is long lines at the checkout counter.17. Flunking out of school, my parents demanded that I get a job.18. The weather forecaster had promise blue skies, but rain began early this morning.19. Although my little girls knows they shouldn’t tease the cat, they often dresses up the animal in doll clothes.20. Dogs such as, Cocker Spaniels and Golden Retrievers have long hair.21. A recent virus is causing nausea vomiting and diarrhea in patients.22. Nancy and her often go to dance clubs.23. Turning on the ignition, the car backfired.Requirements: Please be sure to complete each answer according to the question instructions providedPlease be sure to carefully follow the instructionsNo plagiarism & No Course Hero & No Chegg. My professor will be submitting the paper to TurnitinPlease be sure to include at least one in-text citation for the question answers that require an explanationPlease be sure to use credible or scholarly sources for the question answers that require an explanation

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Learning Goal: I’m working on a proofreading report and need an explanation and

Learning Goal: I’m working on a proofreading report and need an explanation and answer to help me learn.Hello can someone please help me proofread and edit for me.I have attached the google link with comments and also the assignment instructions. Only focus on letters G and H. Please provide proof and also your references. My partner and I are focusing on Breast Cancer in African Women in Washington DCAssignment 3 instructionsThanksplease edit

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Learning Goal: I’m working on a proofreading writing question and need support t

Learning Goal: I’m working on a proofreading writing question and need support to help me learn.Frankenstein evokes literary themes that arguably parallel those found in the development of western thinking along several dimensions, including changes or innovations in: social norms, political organization, scientific discovery, and economic production. Using your own critical thinking in conjunction with the Frankenstein text itself and the historical material and/or current debates we have studied this semester, write a paper where you develop your own conclusion on the appropriate balance between the benefits of society’s pursuit of knowledge (“Light” in Frankenstein) and the potential risks and dangers when that pursuit goes wrong (“Fire” in Frankenstein). Your analysis can take any direction that allows you to present your best writing and deepest analytical thinking. 6 pages minimum pls see grade rubric
Requirements: 6 pages minimum

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Learning Goal: I’m working on a proofreading practice test / quiz and need an ex

Learning Goal: I’m working on a proofreading practice test / quiz and need an explanation and answer to help me learn.Identify the fallacy and explain why you picked that fallacy. (25 points/5 points each1.Well, it’s time for a decision. Will you contribute $20 to our environmental fund, or are you on the side of environmental destruction? 2. Ted: I think we should do more to conserve the environment and not cover pristine countryside with freeways. Fred: So you don’t want freeways to be built at all? How on earth do you imagine we’d get around?3.If the government bans students taking guns to school, next it will ban any guns being taken to school. Next, it will ban anybody taking guns to any public places. Next, the government will ban guns altogether!4.My boss is infallible; he tells me so. I know what he tells me is true because he is always right. Question: You have checked over your paper and you find an ad hominem fallacy. How might you revise your paper to eliminate this fallacy? Fix each sentenceAn egg and a banana is required for the recipe.
2. I nearly spent two hundred dollars on my recent car repair. 3. Each of the children need some attention. 4. Nobody in the class of fifty students understand how to solve the equation on the blackboard.5. Each of those breakfast cereals contain a high proportion of sugar. 6. A sea-going bird the seagull eats fish. 7. Having fired Fred, Ethel was hired.8. The window shade snapped up like a gunshot her cat leaped four feet off the floor. 9. He knew he had flunked the driver’s exam, he ran over a stop sign.10. My daughter refused to stop smoking. Unless I quit also.11. I miss quite a few days of class early in the semester. 12. The store owner watched the shopper carefully, she suspected him of stealing from her before. 13. They thought it was their’s. 14. Experts say, oil spills are dangerous. 15. When I saw my roommate with my girlfriend, I felt worried, angry, andembarrassment as well.16.There is long lines at the checkout counter.17. Flunking out of school, my parents demanded that I get a job.18. The weather forecaster had promise blue skies, but rain began early this morning. 19. Although my little girls knows they shouldn’t tease the cat, they often dresses up the animal in doll clothes.20. Dogs such as, Cocker Spaniels and Golden Retrievers have long hair.21. A recent virus is causing nausea vomiting and diarrhea in patients.22. Nancy and her often go to dance clubs.23. Turning on the ignition, the car backfired.

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I expect highly proficient work as you are an english speaker.

Learning Goal: I’m working on a proofreading project and need support to help me learn.
Hello there,
I need please to paraphrase the whole work with keeping the same meaning of the work and try to keep the length of the work as it is if it is possible. for your info, it is academic work.
Keep the topic of each paragraph as it is, unless if you have another suggestion, then write it between (brackets).
I expect highly proficient work as you are an English speaker.
Thank you so much

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I expect highly proficient work as you are an english speaker.

Learning Goal: I’m working on a proofreading project and need support to help me learn.
Hello there,
I need please to paraphrase the whole work with keeping the same meaning of the work and try to keep the length of the work as it is if it is possible. for your info, it is academic work.
Keep the topic of each paragraph as it is, unless if you have another suggestion, then write it between (brackets).
I expect highly proficient work as you are an English speaker.
Thank you so much